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Wednesday, May 5, 2021

The skydiving story without using the word skydiving

My story<  I felt extremely scared as I stood in front of the open airplane door.  I get shoved out of the please "how rude".  The wind makes my face feel like a kite if it was alive.  I saw clouds whiz past me.  The ground got closer and closer to my feet.    My partner freaks out as we fall to our demise but I pull the tether "I think" and we slowly descended to the earth.  The parachute as it opened, it felt like someone shoryucaned me in the stomach.  I finally reached the ground as my partner on my back is still recovering from his first trip through the sky.  The 2 people that came after us got caught in a blossom tree.  So we had to offer them assistance. >


This is my story about me skydiving without using the word skydiving or skydive. Tell me what I could add to this story.  Sorry if there were spelling mistakes because I was rushed.      

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