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Thursday, June 10, 2021

Deep blue sea poem.

 I would always be mesmerized even if I take the smallest glance at the deep blue sea.  The sound of waves crashing against each other.  The smell of enchanting salt in the clear blue sea fills me with happiness and hope.  While descending deeper and deeper into the deep blue sea.  I see fish with outstanding colours.  I see the schools of fish swim together in harmony.  And I see the beautiful coral reefs shine with the sun as time passes.


But as beautiful as the sea may be.  Dark secrets are hidden beneath all of the sea's glory.  As the sun shines on the deep blue sea, it does not show a healthy sea.  The guards wave  deep below.  Where nature has been dealt with a hefty blow.  Ignorance warmed the planet and the seas in turn.  A lesson that man will learn.  As our marine life lives on.  One day all of the sea life will be all gone.


This is my Sea poem I wrote about what I think about the sea.  This poem doesn't rhyme all the time because the top part doesn't rhyme but the bottom part does.  Please tell me if I did any spelling mistakes. 


1 comment:

  1. hey oliver i really like how much detail you added not to much not to little and i also liked how it gave me enough detail to see what the person in story is.

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